Any writing in these red brackets [ ] was in my original statement of intent and I am considering removing it for the final statement of intent. Question: in the last paragraph should i remove all the 'hiphop words' I gave as examples that aren't in my magazine? By the way, I haven't saved this version to the public drive yet I will be creating a hiphop genre entertainment music magazine targeted for 14 to 18 year olds as stated by the brief. My magazine will be called 'Word Up', as that masthead reflects the colloquial language used in hiphop culture, so the audience will be able to tell the genre of the magazine, and immediately make a judgement of what may be inside and whether this magazine stands out as something they may like to purchase. [ The content provided through the coverlines and on the double page spread include information about new and upcoming hiphop artists, featuring top secret material about them and snea...